Emely Jochumsen
Wednesday, July 20, 2011
Is this a good start to a story ?
Seems like a great start. I wouldn't open with such a deep statement though. Maybe try starting with a little more action..."in media res"...and then later introducing the background and bringing up some heavier points.
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